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May 29, 2009:



Dear Blank:



I am writing you this letter as I am not sure you received my first one. I tried to confirm this by leaving you a phone message. I did not want to leave another message as do not wish to bother anyone. This is also another reason I rarely call.



Since writing you my first letter, things have become much better for me. In fact, it was a very cathartic experience as I was finally able to RELEASE the memory of that day. After I wrote that letter I was able to forgive myself and others. I also realized I was being way too hard on myself for having made a mistake. I discovered that life is way too short to lament over past mistakes and grievances.



Eventually it became apparent I was letting the negative events and individuals of that day adversely affect me. I was letting it affect my self-esteem, self-image, self-worth and thus my soul. This only helped me to discover something called “self-acceptance”. That regardless of my past mistakes , I am still a wonderful person. I am still beautiful no matter how others may have treated me or what others may have written about me in your system.



What matters most is what I think of myself. As long as I know that I am a good person, there is nothing that anyone can say or do to change that. People can gossip and write all the disparaging remarks about me, but it no longer affects me. I realized it is just their thoughts, opinions, comments, theories, words, beliefs, assumptions, perceptions, politics, philosophies, assertions, feelings, judgments, attitudes and perspectives. In short, it is just their minds, it cannot hurt me.



In conclusion my soul has been restored. I am once again happy, bubbly, free – spirited. caring and loving. And yes, above all, I still love myself!



Anyhow, I had wanted to receive confirmation that you received my initial letter. It was my hope that you would share your thoughts or comments. Therefore, I would love to hear from you either way via email or phone. If not, I totally understand and you wish all the best.



Email: ------------------------------

Phone: ----------------------------



I conclude with my favourite quote from the Movie Gia.

(I added the comma - edit this portion too ok)



Life and Death

Energy and Peace

If I stopped today, it was still worth it

Even the terrible mistakes that I have made and would have unmade if I could

The pains that have burned me and scarred my soul

It was worth it

For having been aloud to walk where I walked

Which was to hell on earth

Heaven on earth

Back again

Into

Under

Far in between

Through it

In it and above



Kindest Regards,



Mrs. Blank

B.A %26amp; Bsc. (Dean’s Honours List)I need someone to help me edit this letter?
May 29, 2009:



Dear Blank:



I am writing you this letter, as I am not sure you received my first one. I tried to confirm this by leaving you a phone message. I did not want to leave another message, as do not wish to bother anyone. This is also another reason I rarely call.



Since writing you my first letter, things have become much better for me. In fact, it was a very cathartic experience as I was finally able to RELEASE the memory of that day. After I wrote that letter I was able to forgive myself and others. I also realized I was being way too hard on myself for having made a mistake. I discovered that life is way too short to lament over past mistakes and grievances.



Eventually, it became apparent I was letting the negative events and individuals of that day adversely affect me. I was letting it affect my self-esteem, self-image, self-worth and thus my soul. This only helped me to discover something called “self-acceptance”. That regardless of my past mistakes, I am still a wonderful person. I am still beautiful, no matter how others may have treated me or what others may have written about me in your system.



What matters most is what I think of myself. As long as I know that I am a good person, there is nothing that anyone can say or do to change that. People can gossip and write all the disparaging remarks about me, but it no longer affects me. I realized it is just their thoughts, opinions, comments, theories, words, beliefs, assumptions, perceptions, politics, philosophies, assertions, feelings, judgments, attitudes and perspectives. In short, it is just their minds and opinions, which cannot hurt me.



In conclusion, my soul has been restored. I am once again happy, bubbly, free – spirited. caring and loving. Above all, I still love myself!



Anyhow, I had wanted to receive confirmation that you received my initial letter. It was my hope that you would share your thoughts or comments. Therefore, I would love to hear from you either way via email or phone. If not, I totally understand and you wish all the best.



Email: ------------------------------

Phone: ----------------------------



Life and Death

Energy and Peace

If I stopped today, it was still worth it

Even the terrible mistakes that I have made and would have unmade if I could

The pains that have burned me and scarred my soul

It was worth it

For having been aloud to walk where I walked

Which was to hell on earth

Heaven on earth

Back again

Into

Under

Far in between

Through it

In it and above



Kindest Regards,



Mrs. Blank

B.A %26amp; Bsc. (Dean’s Honours List)